Monday, September 19, 2011

Breath After Breath No More

Breath after breath no more,
Confusion stands concrete,
Solidifies the path for pain to invade…
Concealed the colors of the rainbow,
Welcomed the world of “black and white”
Breath after breath no more,
I carry the testy state of delusion,
I carry the mortal state of confusion and fear,
Your love is my prayer lost in your oblivion,
A dream bashed, a fantasy burnt…
Breath after breath no more
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    Beautiful....I like the way you express yourself and show how deep is your thinking. Continue the good job.

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  2. glorySeptember 21, 2011 at 10:37 PM

    Such a brilliant way of expressing contrast..The words are very expressive and colorful..

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    this is great... I can identify with it... as some of my own feelings.
    Carla LaLota

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  4. mikeOctober 3, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    Another really good poem! Suggestion: don't skip lines in your poems

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  5. Gypsy EyezOctober 3, 2011 at 6:38 AM

    Thanks prof you got it :)

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